deviant art





Login
Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour Lost Password?
Deviant Login
Shop
 Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour
[x]

More from ~reido

Featured in Groups:

Details

February 4, 2005
4.5 KB
Thumb

Statistics

Comments: 1
Favourites: 1 [who?]
Views: 176 (0 today)
Downloads: 41 (0 today)
[x]

Dejeme Adentro

by ~reido

Oh God.   I can hear him out there.  My ear’s pressed against the wood of my door, and I can hear him.

Déjeme adentro, déjeme adentro, déjeme adentro.

What’s he doing out there?  He’s at my grandmother’s door.  It’s right next to mine.  His lips are practically against it.  He’s mumbling, barely forming the words, barely making any noise.

Déjeme adentro, déjeme adentro, déjeme adentro.

What the hell does that even mean?  What the hell is he doing over there?  I’m too afraid to open the door and look, but I know who it is.  It’s him.  It’s him.  I see him sometimes, walking around our neighborhood.  Petting the dogs in the backyards.  Talking to people who don’t even know him.  You’ve got pretty hair, where are you headed, did you get a new car?  Greasy, thin, lanky hair, a disproportional face, a permanent six-o’clock-shadow.

Déjeme adentro, déjeme adentro, déjeme adentro.

Oh shit  that was right in my ear--he’s right outside my door now.  Back in bed, quick quick.  Get under the blankets.  Pull them up to my nose and just hide.

Déjeme adentro, déjeme adentro, déjeme adentro.

Oh God oh God ohGodohGodohGod.

Déjeme adentro, déjeme adentro, déjeme adentro.

What’s he want?  What’s he doing here?  I don’t understand.  I don’t understand what the hell is going on.  Eyes closed.  Maybe he’ll go away.  How did he get in, in the first place?  Why didn’t the alarm go off?  Why didn’t we hear it?  It’s no wonder the dogs didn’t bark, since he always pets them when he walks by.

Déjeme adentro, déjeme adentro, déjeme adentro.

You crazy fucking psycho, how long have you been hiding in our house, waiting for us to go to bed?  Did you come in in the middle of the day, while the alarm was turned off, and just hide somewhere?  Where did you hide?  Why are you here?

Déjeme adentro, déjeme adentro, déjeme adentro.

Stop it!  Stop mumbling that, whateverthefuck it means.  Just—stop, just go away.  Please.  Eyes clamped shut.  If I can’t see him, he can’t see me.  Why isn’t he opening the door—why did he leave my grandmother’s door?  What happened to her?  Oh God, I hope she’s okay.  If you did anything to her you lunatic—

Déjeme adentro, déjeme adentro, déjeme adentro.

Stop it!  Please, please, please just stop it.  Please.  Oh, God, please just let me wake up.  Open your eyes.

Déjeme adentro, déjeme adentro, déjeme adentro.
Déjeme adentro, déjeme adentro, déjeme adentro.


Open your eyes.  Open your eyes.  Open your eyes.
Open your eyes.  Open your eyes.  Open your eyes.

Déjeme adentro, déjeme adentro, déjeme adentro.
Déjeme adentro, déjeme adentro, déjeme adentro.


Oh God oh God oh God.  Just go away you crazy fuck!  Leave us alone!  We don’t have anything you want!  What do you want?!  I don’t understand!  I don’t know why you’re here!

Déjeme adentro, déjeme adentro, déjeme adentro.

Just open the fucking door already!

Déjeme adentro, déjeme adentro, déjeme adentro.

Oh God oh God oh God.  Just open your eyes.  Just open your eyes.

Déjeme adentro, déjeme adentro, déjeme adentro.

Open your eyes.  Oh God.
:iconreido:
Short, horror piece, pumped out in a morning. Stand-alone.
:icondeliriousclarity:
great, really intense
Reply
:icon:
Add a Comment: